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for A Turn for the Better

by Ms_Figg

schedule December 30, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Hello, I had to create an account to leave my review but your writing is so fabulous, it needed to be said. I loved this story and read it all in about a week. Thank you for this amazing work!

schedule December 30, 2020 at 12:00 AM

RIP you wonderful woman, author and I bet one heck of a friend. 

person Rose
schedule December 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 31.
Snape was like, "dude i'm sorry the thing broke.. But can you just look at my yearly budget right now" ahahahahahahahahaha! (Sorry I can't move on beyond that part. Made me so happy!) :)
person Trelweny
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your best Severus/Hermione story yet. I loved their interaction and the plot stemming from time travel complete with explained time paradox... simply delightful. Severus being free of both masters was terrific. Did he chose to apply for Hogwarts on the hope of finding Hermione? Otherwise I can't fathom why he would have.
It was wonderful to see so much of Luna and even Neville. They more often than not don't get enough time. Plus you did wonderful with Luna. I love how you played up both her eccentricity and her intelligence -trailing her hands to find secrets was pure brilliance.

Thanks so much for writing.
person GellyBelly
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The most brilliant witch of her age, I don't think so. The story is wonderful beyond Hermione's need to focus on something stupid after all she had learned in her previous timeline.
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
morganabythesea:

You have to keep in mind that the Hermione of this timeline hasn't experienced much, and her remembrances of her alternate timeline is shadowy. But she feels discontent and a desire for more. Academically, she is still quite formidable, but lacks in application. She's feeling it now. The need to do something more real, physical. Challenging. Looking at her rather dull life, it does seem stupid to take such risks, but that's the problem with paradox. Trying to adjust who she is to who she was in a way that's satisfying. Both aspects are real to her. Just my opinion though. :)

person Moyra
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chap 52 + 53:
That was one of the best lemons you've written, Ms_Figg. The desire, the passion, the lust, the love, the connection between them, everyone getting their turn with being in control - simply fantastic.
person jan
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi miss figg i dont usually review cos i never know what to say , but after reading another of your delicious stories i just felt i had to say how totally wonderful your writing skills are . All the very best to you and yours from an adoring miss figg fan, long live the severus /hermione ship and long live your wonderful writing. Have you ever thought of taking this up professionally your as good as ms rowling if not better, in my humble opinion anyway take care jan xx
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, such a fun ride through this story. And educational, as promised!