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by TwistedMe

person Anon
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*twitch twitch....* please don't tell you've watched inuyasha before....cause voldemort currently reminds me of naraku -_- (although i have to say, for a villan naraku looks much nicer - hotter...- compaired to voldy in snake form)
person nikki
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what happens
person harryseverus
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i was surprised ithought it was going to be more towwards hard rrape and left to bleed but i like the way you turned it into a soul mate thing and i hope there is a sequel or another chapter
person JC
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I freakin love this story
person deaths_mistress
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is very inventive, and I would love for you to continue it!
person Katharos
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harry Potter + Lord Voldemort + Tentacles = One happy Katharos! I can't wait for the chapter 3 so I can see more HP/LV tentacle sex and possibly Dumbledore and/or Snape have a heart attack when he/they find out. lol
person mandy
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story please update soon
person akume
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice follow-up, but hopefully there'll be more of a plot next time. I't kinda felt like you were re-stating what was previously written on the first chapter. Besides, why go through all the trouble of having Tom remove Harry's clothes without leaving possible evidence of rape and then have them apparate to Tom's stronghold where they decide to go forward to round two. Anyway, thanks again for the new chapter and I'm sorry if you don't like my comments. They are in no way meant to stunt your writing. Quite the opposite. Until next time.

P.S.

I last reviewed under the name of akume. Just so you know.
person Shelik
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice sorry about what happend with yr power and all. And yes it seems to flow nicely it a very good story so far.
person Vittani
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it so much its wrong. Shouldnt feel this way for a story. I think this is brilliant, hot and thought provoking. Also slightly freaky, which is always good.