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for Caught

by TwistedMe

person love2bug63670
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you write more, it is really interesting.
person Zuka
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm different,... i like it i mean i've never read a tom/Harry pair with Mpreg in it. so there for continue. i look forward to seeing an update. ^_^
person akume
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn. That's some scary shit, but I liked it. Well, do continue with this story I can't wait for the follow-up.
person DM
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Intereting start. Can't wait for more.
person Eci_Frog
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has a really interesting start. Sounds promesing. I hope you update soon.
person Kitsune Spyk (not logged in)
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What the fuck was that?!?!? That was a little creepy, but I liked it.... Please continue with the story... Yes people could make their own... but the writing style would be different. It was.... different... please continue... I would like to find out more about Tom... and see how Harry is going to react.
person Lilaithia
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more!
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the tentacles are a bit creepy, but i like it
person cris
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic, I know a little of english, I use a translator for read in english.
There is any chance you continue write the fic?. I realy love read more
person sadistic slut
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
twisted you is right! lol! but i liked it! it was different and really awesome! please continue! but one thing i noticed, you didn't mention tentacles in the begining, when Voldemort first transformed back into Riddle. It would've mad eit easier to cach on instead of sitting here going "Tenteacles? What tentacles?" But I really liked it. So please cotinue.