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by roxierose13

person Althea
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I really like how you ended it with Harry and Hermione catching each other. Great job, keep writing.
~Misery
person Avanell
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed it...loved how harry was there with draco. but will STILL love to read ron, lav, and parvati's reactions!!! Sigh...wishing.
person Meritamon
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep writing!!! Don't finish it. It is a really good story and definately not one of the cliches. Don't waste it. YOU HEVE TO CONTINUE..... Please?????
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Final? FINAL!!!!!! WHAT!!!!!!!!

Come on, plese, at least a few more, pretty please? It was great... I'd love to see Harry's and Ron's reactions at least two more to show the reactions of their friends and colleagues. Pwetty pwease?
person Rosamund
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read the first chapter before, and loved what you did in the second! I hope you come up with some ideas, cos I want more! Like other girls (hint Lav and Parvati) jealous she got such a hunk! Yummy! Maybe a jealous ron and/or draco...delighted ginny! And let's not forget his fantasies coming true!!!
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh good, I hope it is with Hermione and Blaise!
person pickles87
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol so didn't hermione jump into his fantasy mind
person Mia
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jajajaja..it's look to me like Hermione knows something that Blaise doesn't...
person slytherinprincess113
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oohhh!!!! That was good! I hope to have the next chappie soon.