rate_review Reviews

fabulous ending... i love the twist. i almost wish you would continue but know that its prob best left as is. but great job really

oh, wow you are so awesome, very fuuny and great!!

Lol, great fic. love the whole Harry?! Hermione?! what are you doing here part.

It was a very, very good piece of writing. Really. Nicely portrayed, nicely written and the final twist was the best.

Only comment, the use of the words 'he' and 'she' was a little repetitive. It was not bad at all, but you could try to use longer sentences. I know it's hard, it happened to me before, but it improves with the practice.

Please don't change your style and the way you 'tell' the tale, it is the refreshing part.

Iliana

That was great! But I wanted more! Damn Blaise and Hermoine are hot! :D it was great!

YES! That was AWESOME. I especially love how Harry and Hermione catch each other in the act. Brilliant!

All is right with the world INDEED! THANK YOU forputting Harry and Draco in there! I LOVE H/D! This fic was excellent, very hot stuff, and I love the Blaise and Hermione pairing. THe bit in chapter 1 where Blaise is yearning for her is especially hot. The description of his meddling under her shirt with the bra and all certainly reminded me of my bi leanings. :p yum. My only critique is that I am sad that Ron is sad. But I love the H/D moment, and the way you characterize Hermione. Blaise could have been a bit more personality and less horny teenager, but this was a good fic nevertheless. Thanks for sharing! I wish someone would write Ron/Blaise one of these days. (Challenge, anyone??)

BWAHAHAH!!! I LOVE the cameo...

I really had fun reading this. I laughed so hard at the end. Great Job!!

Damn it!!! I want more!!
It's really good!

....pleeeeeeeeease??

~Spirit