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for Tie Me Down

by negolataknofelet

person Obsidian Phoenix
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting....very interesting I hop you will update soon so we can see how this all plays out...besides those two in leather are simply delicious....update soon
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it, very interesting beginning... if not a ittle dangerous..meeting with a complete stranger like that. well i guess they are wizards so they can take care of themselves and harry is the worlds saviour... ok i'll stop rambling :) good beginning
person Angelkitty
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooh me likey! please write more! i must say that a draco like this sounds lovely..... *Prrr* i like the premises because it really could happen if you were adventurous enough... (need i mention Cyber for gods sakes?) But still, i love it please write more (this coming from a girl who wears a collor on a regular basis ;) )
person BadFaith
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o u evil evil person how r u just gonna leave it there...please update this story seems really interesting
person rpgirl
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOT WOOT! GIMMIE MORE GIMMIE MORE!!!
person Bianca D.
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty good start, I really am intrigued on how this is going to turn out. However, I recommend getting a beta, some of the misspelled words and awkward grammar made it harder to read. Please continue the story though, I want to find out what happens next.
person Vittani
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey please update soon,
person Phoenix 5
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good start, I want to read more. Pease update as soon as you can.
person emma
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sounds good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope you update again soon
person YamiBakura
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm a complete sucker for sub!Harry... Please update soon? And i think you meant 'course' yes? You kept writing 'cause' and it threw me off.