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This was a very good short story I'd love more.

great story but I don't understand why she has to marry him....who decreed it? obviously, she having money problems. the whole "save your father" is rather beauty/beast themed. and hermione is very lovely, untraditional beauty; draco doesn't need to be so cruel. I hope he falls hard and FAST.

This is really good. I hope you update soon. I really want to know what is going to happen next.

love it can't wait for more

wow ... that was great .. what is up with mione's father .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

I like your story, even if i don't like your penname. Update soon, please!

A good first effort. I seem to remember that in the books, Draco's grandfather Malfoy was dead of Dragon Pox, and that his grandfather Black (Narcissa's father) was also dead. Do you plan on giving a backstory to discuss the difference between this story and canon? Other than that, you've done a good job in drawing your characters, and given Hermione a good backstory and reason for her emotions in this chapter. Draco's character is also realistically drawn, and you've set up their juxtaposition well. You have piqued my interest in how this will end up further down the line.

Loved the first chapter. You have caught my interest and I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter.

Dear writer,

WOULD YOU UPDATE ALREADY!!!! PLEASE....

And Brit, would you please leave some room for the rest of us, huh? Wink!

it's not good, neither was it bad, it was okay.