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GREAT PLOT LINE!!
Love it! you ahve to update soon!
-Mystical Panther

Well, it is good that they were able to get out. Her sister almost spilled the beans, didn't she? She is a bitch. What is the locked room? A potions room? I can't wait until they learn what each other are.
Sansa

Oh, what a tangled web we weave. I am glad that this Sasha seem to be loyal to Snape, because surly if he moves in and she visited, she could recognise him. Maybe he could actually brew the potions thru her, and none of the order would know. Wouldn't that be something if he actally saved Dumbledore. Great story. Please update quickly.

Sansa

So, Esme is much more than a simple witch. Just who did she kill this morning? Was it someone after Severus, or was it a death eater trying to escape Britain? Just what does Christien know that he has to ascertain for himself, and then talk to Esme about? Could it be that he know's who Snape really is? The French ministry seems to be far reaching and much smarter than the English ministry, are they going to intervene in the Voldemort problem. Is the English ministry in cahoots with Voldemort? I will be very interested to learn all of these answers, and to find out what is going to break loose in Britain. I sure do hope Esme can return in time, and that she can convince Snape to go with her. I look forward to his reaction when he finds out she is a witch. Please update quickly.

Sansa

I knew from her reaction from him refering to Merlin that she at least had to be familiar with the wizarding world, but after this chapter she definately has to be a witch. Must be muggle born. What are her secrets? What is her buisness she is attending to that must seem to take longer than it really does? I just love this story, and it does just keep getting more interesting. Please update it very soon!

This is a wonderful story, I just finished all 12 chapters. You really get into your charachters thoughts and feelings quite descriptively. You did a good job of making the reader guess which female charachter was going to end up with Snape. This is also a very well rounded story bringing in so many aspects of the wizarding world. I am really enjoying reading it. I have been following Enigma too, and like it very much, but this one far surpasses that one. I look forward to see how all of the different parts of your story will tie together. I wish for Severus to be happy for once in his life, but also that Dumbledore would live. I hope that you will update soon!

ch 12: Wonderfully well done. The story has plot, characterization, and it is well written.

The original characters are incredible; they really come to life on the page. I started becoming impatient with the situation in England because I wanted to get back to Chris, Esme, Gil, and Sebastian.

Your Remus is very interesting in a not so good way, and the scenes with him and Hermione, and him and Sirius are amazing.

More Please.