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for You Lie Beneath Me

by ZooArmy

person Kayo
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I stumbled across this, and I'm so glad I did! It was good, and it was hot, and I really enjoyed it. ^____^ \/ Please continue writing yummy fanfiction.
person sable_silverrain
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SO SEXY!!!!!!!! *dies*
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Not bad at all. Actually it's pretty damn good. Orgasm without the sex. It's a first for me, not that I orgasmed. You know what I mean. Well anyway I look forward to seeing you other work.
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! To be someone's everything... bet I wouldn't get that from my hubby. *sigh*
person lolo313(Not signed it.)
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good! I loved it, the characters were supurbly portrayed! I would love to see Draco answer that question for harry, if you would be so kind.
person misslala
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Very hot!!!! :) I hope to see more of your stuff.
person graballz
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1--oh god I can't breathe!!!! THAT WAS SO FUCKING HOTTTTTTT! HOLY SHIT! GOD I love it when they fuck, but I FUCKING LOVE IT when one of them can make the other come without touching them too!!!!

Okay, I know you said this was a "oneshot" but it can't be, on a technicality. Draco came....but Harry didn't. At the end of the story, Harry still has a hard-on! That must be rectified IMMEDIATELY! ;) (yes, this is a subtle but still shameless plug for more because this chapter was SO amazing!)

And I also agree with the other reviewers: Draco needs to wipe that smirk off Harry's face but good! (and we wanna watch!)
person NightLo
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is just sweet and oh...Harry is so sexy! Would there be a POV from Draco?
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoo I love it! Harry's such a tease! hahah I loved the way he was narrating everything too, honestly who could resist that? Great fic!
person VRon8899
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WELL! that certaintly *did* answer his question -snickers- nicely done! and Hot to boot!! *love* ^^