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for White Lips Kissed

by darkyasmin

person Jordan
schedule April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The feels you ingenious bastard my feels. (English translation: i loved it. It made me cry great job!)
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was so sad. erotic but sad.
I actually had tears in my eyes. bravo for a well written piece.
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was very sad and very beautiful. Unfortunately, I first read this on the page of the person that plagiarized it (and I knew immediately that they stole it!) I'm so sorry that happened to you. I hope you have reported them. I know I plan to. Again, wonderful story.
person Karen
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
quite sweet. But you need to replace "trusts" and "trusting" with "thrusts" and "thrusting"
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was breathtaking. I had tears rolling down my face as I finished it!
Wow, really...great job. I'll look for more of your writing in the future!

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