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for No More Pain

by slashwriter

person moony
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really liked this chap...are you going to make an evil harry?
person zoe
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
brilent chapter I hope Tom drains all of Dudlys friends and off course dudly himself
person ren
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow keep writing i love this story
person CassandraMalfoy
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This first chapter to the story sounds great.
Please continue this story ASAP.
person Anon
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent first chapter. I would love to read more.
In the end, you ask "is uncle vernon not eating dinner tonight"
shouldn't it be "is dudley not eating dinner tonight?"
It just dind't seem to fit...so..yeah..
Please keep writing. I hope that you don't change Tom's personality TOOO much. Remember that he is a slytherin...manipulative and self serving and extremly intellegent (before he went mad of course). I don't want him to be Terrible to harry...but...you know...you can't make him sappy either..otherwise he just would not be tom riddle.
Will Dumbledore realise that Harry isn't staying at teh Dursleys...will he still go to hogwarts if he and tom go to the riddle house?
I hope that he goes to hogwarts..and i would like to hear some of their conversations about it.
person Zuka
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please oh please continue, i wish to read more, it's very good. and at fiorst i thought you ment that he would get the diary in his second year not his first. but this works awsomely. hope to see an update soon. ^_^
person ranni
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Hope to see the next chapter sooN!
person kunitsu
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story seem promising. I think it will become a great story. Update soon
person Jaklyn Toki
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the concept. Seems interesting. You must continue! And soon!
person jifferbelle
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well i'm liking it so far its well written if a bit rushed, though with more chapters i hope that bit improves

can't wait for your next update

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