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for No More Pain

by slashwriter

person Xenia Marvolo
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story very much. The plot is really interesting. Please update soon and try to not abondon this story as I'm very interested in it. This fic is fascinating!!
Update soon)))

Wish you all best,
Xenia
person Tamura
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww, poor harry. all alone. tom better get his ass back to privet drive and help harry out. after all, he's getting him out.
person ren
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pretty please write this is a great story...
person krista_shadow
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay you updated... im really starting to love this story
person fallenxkiss
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh very nice! I want to see Tom get Harry out <3

person kunitsu
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is turning out to be something good. Update soon
person Chinu
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you should get you a beta for better. There are a lot of mistakes in your tenses and that's distracting the reading flow a bit. But never the less a good beginning. Let's see how you go on with it. ^^
person Lina
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! It is SO AWESOME!!!!!
person ryuuta
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yey for Slytherin!Harry!

Was Quirrell possessed or was he simply a servant of Voldemort's who had a task of giving the diary to Harry? Because if Harry resurrects Tom then there is still a piece of Voldemort's soul floating around or on the back of Quirrel's head.

Did Harry tell Tom he's the boy who lived, or did he simply tell him he's a wizard who's parents died, and who's living with his muggle relatives? I'd like to listen on to Tom's thoughts :P

Interesting start, I'm looking forward to more!
person Shelik
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
humm love it but what would make it even better is if you updated ^_^