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for In My Mind

by LJofTheDarkThrone

person eroburn
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so very interesting.
poor child.
soooo ownage
wish i had thought of it.
please update?
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 5! Seventh child?
person Angelkitty
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lovely! i like your story and can't wait for you to write/post more :) wow... 7 kids? that is a lot of children lol... though i can't say it wouldn't be nice... if the means were available :) Please write more and once you write it i'll try to find the order and maybe i'll figure it out all the way :) without getting slightly confused... not that i don't like it though i just have the tendancy to think in order of time but at least i'm good at remembering plot! Are you going to put an erotic encounter between Draco and Harry? or is it going to be up to our imaginations?..... I can't wait for more!
person AHhahhah
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heheh, I like how your mind works. ^__^ but I was a bit confused at how it jumped from the bathroom scene back to first year? Is it still the same story? Anyways, very nice work! I liked it! ^__^
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Must have chapter 4!