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for This Is The Way The World Ends II

by tulipsaside

person HisCoyMistress
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! I really enjoyed Part One, and I can't wait to read new chapters for Part Two! initially I had some trouble buying into such a cruel James and Sirius, but it did so much for the plot and for the development of Snape's character that it worked.
There are so many clever twists and turns- I love the backwards chain-reaction you've set up, and the way it continues to unfold with the story.
Can't wait for more!
person PJ
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I stayed home sick from work today and read the entire first part of this story. I loved every second of it! I have read several time-turner fics, but this is the first that actually gives a believable reason for Snape to hate Sirius and James so much. They are so cruel, and they'd have to be to feel any sympathy at all for Snape. It was great, and I love how Hermione slowly falls in love with him.

It will be very interesting to see what kind of (if any) relationship they can have now. I do hope that you are an author who writes happy endings!
-PJ
person snapeaddiction
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to see the continuation of this story! Also, love the fact that Snape appears so soon. I can't wait to read more - loving the angst! You have me hopelessly addicted to this story. Your talent is amazing!
person DanniV
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo i must have more please i'm begging you i don' think i can take not knowing what happens another second!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I read both stories in one day and i can't think about anything else!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!
person SilverShadow
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh!!!!!!Just wonderful I was so happy to see that you wrote another chapter so quickly I wasn't expcecting you to update for at leat another week. Thank you thank you. Well done with this first chapter. I would of liked to seen Snape a little bit more in shock at her using his first name though. Like he knew then and there that she had just come back from the past kind of thing. I think that would of been kind of cool the whole shock look come over his face and then the iron mask of coldness to come back over his face kind of thing.

Keep it up though and I am looking forward to the rest of this story.
person Citten
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait to see where you take this i am so excited!!! please have an update soon! :) now what will hermione do and how will she find him!?
person septentrion
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to see the sequel coming. Thanks for writing so quickly.
person Anon
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay. I was hoping you wouldn't leave the first one as it was and forget about continuing. I can't wait for more. You are an excellent writer. Keep up the good work.
person sheedy
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You continued! Update soon please.
person Emmylovedraco
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I been waiting for this story to start I loved part1 So I know this well be good too,