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for Beyond Pathetic

by FarAway

person starstrucklover
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
incredible! can't wait for the next review!

**and personally i like snape as pathetic as possible...whether it's in his character or not
person sisperia
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amazing story. love the angstyness! keep it up!
person scully_m_
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I fics when you are in his mind. They are much more fun to read. I like your pathetic version of him... but reallly , isn't everyone mildly pathetic when it comes to lust or love... I know I am *sigh*
person rubberduck
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I totaly disagree with Kacy. I for myself have always hated this whole sex-god-snape-thing. It
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please - this is pretty original and I can't wait for more.
person Ryu
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! Someone that can admit to being unoriginal and even better a story that in its lovely Snapey Unsappy-ness stands out like a Tiffanys diamond among Christmas cracker cheapo crap that nobody wants. Truly a jem!
person Ryu
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and I can't even spell " gem" right...* shakes head sadly *
person Ryu
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Urgh no, not the 40 year old virgin all over again!!! Which means their first time is going to be over in a matter of seconds. How sad.
person sinbad
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it, keep it up!
person skye
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww.....this is sweet. I can hardly wait for the next chapter(s)! I love your private-snape personality.