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for Beyond Pathetic

by FarAway

person SSHappiness
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story - an I can easily imagine Severus a virgin - considering how his life has been lived. He really isn't the most personally confident person around. Hope to see an update soon
person amsev
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sev, he's a mess. I am enjoying this story however, because I suspect he'd be more likely to be a bit of an emotional mess rather than the Snarky Sex God as portrayed in so many fics. I hope Hermione is gentle with him!

I look forward to reading more!
person Queen Celestia
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 1 - love it!
person Queen Celestia
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh I love Virgin Snape :3
person Queen Celestia
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Snape and yes Lucius is evil. D<
person Queen Celestia
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol Severus daydreaming
person Anon
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
top notch for a first time. I'm loving it.
person MsVanessa
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your Severus is adorable.
person skye
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HA! Lucius + "special" bottle of wine = trouble!!!!!! loved the floo call....
person skye
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...and Hermione's dry sense of humour about missing being knocked unconcious.....heeheee......