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for Beyond Pathetic

by FarAway

schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've fallen in love with this story please continue writing soon, I can't wait to see how it goes.
person Anon
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story... Please keep writing!
Looking forward to a new post!
person Angie30
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, this is such a lovely story
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love it. please update again soon!!
person Katha
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh :D I like the plot... Kind of a cute Severus you`re drawing there :) .. Update soon!
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 cracked me up. Your slightly sarcastic style of writing is very appealing.
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 is so sweet!
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM

schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like that you made Snape act like a shy teenager. I actually felt pity for him.