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Damn Ron and his stupid jealousy. I was kind of sorry to see it end that way felt kind of cheated I suppose, like will they ever get back together after that whole mess is said and done? Guess will have to leave it my own imagaination as to what would happen next.

OOOhh, who was watching?????

oh no! who could be watching? i love this story! update soon!

@5. awesome story, things moved fast but i like it, update soon

*DB*

oh no, who is watching them..... ron, draco??? please update soon!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Can't wait for more.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

ooooo catchy very catchy i like it i want more of it. update asap. if you if update i'll keep reviewing.lol

I like where this is going. While chapter 2 is my favorite thus far, the shower scene certainly added some flair. My biggest issue with the shower scene was how it went from soaping to rinsing straight into fucking. Granted, good ol' Severus was in the "zone" so to speak, and he was just ready to go at it -- but what if Hermione teased him a bit? What if she absolutely refused to let his dick get anywhere near her until he just couldn't take it anymore?

Anal play works, and it was certainly a good way to introduce it.

I also like the recurring, "Are you *sure* you haven't done this before?" That leaves a bit of mystery in the air; you don't just go into a teacher's office and want to fuck and let it go. Knowing Hermione, she's definitely had a well-organized plan, and now she can have him anytime she wants.

That said, I'm anticipating the next chapter.