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by EvieMarie

person mel
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a fantastic fic so far! i can't wait for more please update soon!
person angel
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now she knows he is telling the truth .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story and I'm enjoying it very much. I'm thinking I have a new favorite ship! lol

One thing I have noticed several is times is your use of "vile". You mean "vial" as in a container, vile of blood. Vile means disgusting. :)

Keep up the great work and I'll keep reading. :)

Happy new year!
person angel
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was great i love it ..please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now .. and a have a happy new year...

angel
person Annie
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this, update soon.