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for Twisted Lust

by nymphbot

person Phoenix
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bit of a random review but sometimes i come on here and i have been desperately trying to finish your story for ages and you have finally added the last chapter

i only have one word for the end to this story...

Perfect

person raven
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was fantastic.
you absolutely must write a sequel.
i llok out for it;)
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back Lux! Hope your comp is now up and running well! Now, for the story... :( :( :(

I knew there would be death from the very beginning... but dang... was still hoping they might have lived to be happy. Not surprised it was Harry, but sad because I didn't want to see them die. But that's not to say I didn't like the ending. In fact I think it was very appropriate, but premature too. There is definitely a need for revenge. For Harry to get away with it would be a SIN, and you did promise in a previous comment that Hermoine WOULD get her revenge. As such, I think a sequel is most definitely in order! :D

Loved the story, loved the writing, and would love to read a sequel.
person misslala
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this so didn't end like i thought it would with Harry being the instigator of everything, the one who orchestrated the whole thing, I mean I was stuck on Weasley - hrm...so am I to guess that Hermione faked her death or what? I mean is she still alive and killed Draco? Some questions are unanswered really...hrm...sequel would be good.
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow
What a great endingg
So sad though.
I don't like Harry,
He's sick.
He should die
Or be castrated.
Or both.
Make a sequel !
Harryy must be punished.
Badlyy.
But yeahh,
Amazingg storyy,
Be proud of it,
Cause youu damn well should be.

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
person Shananigans
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow wow wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!I have been following your story forever. That was fucking amazing. How could it be a sequel tho? Hermione's dead. I can't believe it was Harry!! i figured it out like..20 seconds before i scrolled down and seen his name. How depressing. Sucks that Hermione had to commit a murder suicide though. it was truly amazing tho!!
Shannon
person Etain
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha that was wonderful! a pretty pretty lady with auburn eyes and curly hair... oohhhh!! that's awsome.. and harry harry what a bad person!! how dare he!! i can't believe it was him!!! he's so dumb!!!! i'm glad it wasn't draco!! the poison thing was awsome!! and sequel!! omg yes sequel!!!!
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Only request is to be notified of update. I found this today and I'm goin nuts having to wait when getting this far. It's GOOD!! Twisted, but GOOD!!!! :)
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lux.... Where's the last chapter?!?!?! PLEASEEEE UPDATE SOON!!! I check every day for the final chapter! Dying to find out what happens in the end!!
person Izzi
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My request is anything but original. Don't make Draco evil!

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