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for Loves Nightmare: Hate's Dream

by Rumpelyssa

person BuffyXO
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So they know and I hope that you know ... so when we will know? You can leave Hermione in the dark for a while, but not your loyal readers and reviewers. Another great story with another great chapter -- do you ever write something that is redundant or sucks?
person Dee Dee
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this challenge, it inspired me to post some challenges myself.
I guess Lucius and Severus know the dream means LM and HG are meant to unite their lives. When Hermione finds out she is going to go nuts, and I am guessing her boyfriend will not be happy. Rabastan could try to feed the ministry information on Lucius just to get him out of the way. I hope Hermione does not confide in her boyfriend about her dreams, or Lucius could be in lots of trouble.
Wonder how Hermione will figure it out. Knowing her she will research and figure it out on her own. Or maybe she confides on her friend Ginny and they figure it out together.
I think Snape can be a kind of matchmaker for his friend. That should keep him entrained at Order headquarters.
If Rabastan tried to get Lucius killed, Snape could be his only hope. Snape could vow that Lucius is going to help the Order and should be given a chance, since he has knowledge that even he (Snape) had no access to as a spy.
Wonder how the order member will react to Lucius as an Order member. I guess he will replace Snape as the most unwelcome member.
person firewall
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1 - I sincerely hope that even if this isn't what Shiloh was thinking of, that you'll continue it. This was very very good. I think Hermione should get rid of those chocolates though...remember MadEye's edict...never touch any drink (or food) that you don't prepare. ;^)
person angel
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome i love it .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now .. have a happy new year

angel
person ShilohDarke
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome start! I loved it, and I am thrilled that you chose someone original to have Hermione involved with. I love it and I am so happy you decided to do the challenge. I can't wait to see where you take it! Pretty cool room and vision in her dreams, if I do say so myself!

Loved it and want more... but promise to be patient as I know you are working on other stories as well.

SD
person LaBibliographe
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, I like it. What comes next? What comes next? Yay! Another Lucius story. Okay, okay, Hermione's in it, too. I like the two of them, but I'd take Lucius with just about anyone resembling the distaff side, or hmmm, just about anyone - period. SO...what comes next? Oh!(innocent look, batting eyelashes) Did I say that already? ;-)