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Uhh a love triangle, he he... What is a girl to do? But on the other hand who wouldn't want those men yearning after you?? ;-) Keep up the good work

A Wet Malfoy = A Very Happy Buffy / A hot dream interrupted = A Sad Buffy

If you want to make me happier, updating often is the quickest way to my heart, but being such a fan of your writing you really do not need much help. I do like the love triangle going on with Snape to push the right buttons at the right times. I think you have done well in pacing the story. I would like to know when Hermione had feelings for Snape and if he ever knew about them. What an interesting predicament you have landed her in! Two beautiful, dark princes both vying for her attention and love, oh to be a muse in one of your stories ...

Chapter 3: "showing off his tackle" (snort), that's a good one. Nice visual, "...he oozed out of the room." Very Slytherin. Lucius is certainy 'Rabbie-rousing'; he's always so good at goading people.

Who doesn't have erotic dreams about Lucius in black wet swimming trunks. (And out of them...)

Why did the Order just let Lucius in without worrying about his allegiances? I would be extremely paranoid about his going over to the other side were I a member of the Order. Are you going to have Lucius watched surreptitiously? Have Rabbie assigned, or he could volunteer. Is Rabbie now a member of the Order and not part of the Death Eaters any more because the DEs KNOW he has switched sides? Why isn't Lucius more angry at Rabbie for causing the deaths of his fellows? I suppose that self-preservation element comes into play, huh? Well, limes are good and UST is always good, too. Please update soon.

I love this story! Poor Hermione is having difficult times between Rabastan and Lucius. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

man .. that is a girl to do ...sh eis dreaming of lucius and she say she hates him she going to marry rabastan ... hmm how is lucius going to stop that and sev must be having a fun time with it all ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

Chapter 2: Ah, the homey virtues of a convenient potted plant. A grumbly, irritated Lucius with the requisite erotic overtones - he's mesmerizing already. I loved your phrase, "He was all for preservation

YEAH an update, I really enjoyd myself, keep up the good work, I really REALLY love your story :D

CoralineBlack

Wow, I really like the way your story is starting out, I've also read the challenge and thought it was a very interesting one. I can't wait for an update, keep up the fantastic work :D

Tee Hee! I like it. I can see definate possibilities of where this is going to go! I am enjoying it and I am happy you added another chapter. Looking forward to seeing more!

SD

wow ... that are they going to to .. and whois knocking on snape's door now ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel