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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gee, Bella I`m your fan, really. Another brilliant story. Another Lucius/Severus/Hermione...Three favourites in one. How do you do this? Fantastic plot.
Do you spend half of your life constructing them? Don`t stop please. I want to read more!!!
Love me or die...ekhm...does this ultimatum sound similar to one used by certain Sheriff of Nottingham one day in certain movie, of is it just my imagination?:))
Awesome...as always...I can`t wait for another update.
See you soon, Bella
Luciana
Do you spend half of your life constructing them? Don`t stop please. I want to read more!!!
Love me or die...ekhm...does this ultimatum sound similar to one used by certain Sheriff of Nottingham one day in certain movie, of is it just my imagination?:))
Awesome...as always...I can`t wait for another update.
See you soon, Bella
Luciana
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now that Severus knows Hermione had feelings, hope he goes after her. I think Hermione will go nuts, but Ginny will be affected to. She keeps a close eye on Hermione and will notice Snape's affection; wouldn
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now that Severus knows Hermione had feelings, hope he goes after her. I think Hermione will go nuts, but Ginny will be affected to. She keeps a close eye on Hermione and will notice Snape's affection; wouldn
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh man .... that is she going to do ... and how will rabastan take that new of is love haveing to fall in love with someone els and lucius of all people ...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
angel
angel
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cackling madly!!! I love it! the raw squid line fit in perfectly! I can't wait to see how she reacts to his news! I bet she'll refuse to believe at first! I liked seeing the attraction that Snape seemed to have to both Ginny and Hermione... although, I must admit I was more curious about his attraction to Ginny...
Smiles innocently, SD
Smiles innocently, SD
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Poor Lucius. Hermione should take him more seriously about the dream. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Four: Snape's line, "...try not to be too Malfoy about it," was great! The name is synonymous with the behavior and so perfect. Their bickering was priceless. I love those two scratching at each other but friends.
Draco is incompetent in this story? How so? Will that be explained later? Just curious - no compulsion to know, really, if he isn't in the story. And I actually goggled, when Arthur wondered if Lucius had blood in his veins. So this story doesn't particularly represent Lucius as successful with the ladies I presume... Either that or Arthur doesn't hear all the juicy gossip, but with a wife like Molly I think that must be impossible.
Off! Off! Take it off! Hermione can't wear Rabbie's engagement ring. She's making a horrible mistake. Save her, Bella. You heard the voice, Hermione and Lucius are a "Done" deal. If they don't start drinking lots of lemonade soon, they might die. Their poor, parched throats are sooo dry. The firewhiskey won't do it (although it might spur some action), so serve them (and us) some lemonade forthwith!
Oh -- and something to fix? "...she saw Lucius stand at the bookshelf with an empty whiskey glass in her hand." Should be HIS hand?
You write quickly so here's my solution. Give Rabbie a love potion and sic him on McGonagall. 8-)
Draco is incompetent in this story? How so? Will that be explained later? Just curious - no compulsion to know, really, if he isn't in the story. And I actually goggled, when Arthur wondered if Lucius had blood in his veins. So this story doesn't particularly represent Lucius as successful with the ladies I presume... Either that or Arthur doesn't hear all the juicy gossip, but with a wife like Molly I think that must be impossible.
Off! Off! Take it off! Hermione can't wear Rabbie's engagement ring. She's making a horrible mistake. Save her, Bella. You heard the voice, Hermione and Lucius are a "Done" deal. If they don't start drinking lots of lemonade soon, they might die. Their poor, parched throats are sooo dry. The firewhiskey won't do it (although it might spur some action), so serve them (and us) some lemonade forthwith!
Oh -- and something to fix? "...she saw Lucius stand at the bookshelf with an empty whiskey glass in her hand." Should be HIS hand?
You write quickly so here's my solution. Give Rabbie a love potion and sic him on McGonagall. 8-)
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! I love this latest chapter! It was chock full of hot limeade! I LOVED IT! That was one steamy dream! I'm speechless! I'm filled with longing for more! I can't wait to see what will happen next??? Maybe a midnight rendevous in the library??? ( BUT NO Dream this time?)
You are doing a great job, Bella, and I feel truly honored that sch an imaginative writer picked up my challenge! 100 points to you for imagination and a wonderful way with words!
Shiloh
You are doing a great job, Bella, and I feel truly honored that sch an imaginative writer picked up my challenge! 100 points to you for imagination and a wonderful way with words!
Shiloh
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was quick how Lucius was accepted in the Order and let in headquarters. I guess he does not want to fight the prophesy or premonition that he got from the dream. I look forward to his pursuit of Hermione! But when Rob gets jealous and desperate, he could make Lucius out to be a traitor or a spy for Voldemort. I bet most of the Order would not have a problem believing that. When will Draco join the Order? Will he go after Hermione also?
So Hermione is starting to find Lucius attractive even in her dreams, smart girl. But that could put a damper on her engagement. Her boyfriend is jealous and I am guessing Severus and Lucius will exploit that to get Hermione away form him. Also Rab seems a bit possessive of Hermione, and perhaps that is another exploitable weakness. I don
So Hermione is starting to find Lucius attractive even in her dreams, smart girl. But that could put a damper on her engagement. Her boyfriend is jealous and I am guessing Severus and Lucius will exploit that to get Hermione away form him. Also Rab seems a bit possessive of Hermione, and perhaps that is another exploitable weakness. I don