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by yousovain

person nihgtowl
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was so hot. *Rush for a cold shower*.
A very sexy Snape who is in character and Hermione who couldn
person marti
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the very definition of PWP!!!! omfg, I was fanning myself by the end, and damn! Him walking out was almost as exciting as him fucking Hermione! If this is a one-shot, I"m happy, but if you decide to continue to a couple more chapters, well, you'll have made a fan for life!

Live long and prosper!

Marti
person Lucy
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm impressed.
I liked that quite a lot actually.
I know that you labled this as PWP and not a WIP, but I think, if you were open to the idea, you could make a real story out of it.
This actually reminded me of my own story a little bit, in that the first couple chapters of my story are very PWPish, and at the end (of the PWP section) Snape walks away with a cruel and very Snapely comment.
The comment, actually, was what made me think this story could be more. Snape THINKS that this takes care of the crush...
But what if it doesn't? Hmmm?
This could make for a very yummy story I say.
But even if you don't continue, it was still very good.
Kudos for you!
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOH there has got to be more, please? You can't end it like that? What about the consequences? Please, tell me there's more!
person Kade
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great fic...I hope there is more to come...
person MORE!!!!!
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I don't think that cured the crush. More, please!
person Divine Angel
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*shudder* fabulous, horny, wonderful little fic. Yummy.
person parmel
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH My gosh that was yummy! Maybe you should add another chapter for the ride back home ;) lol
person Mads
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fucking Awesome! Love your portrayl of the deliciously wicked potions Master! Also love the fact this is one hell of a WELL written fic!