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wahooooo barty :P

Okay.. That's messed up..
There I saw, hoping for a happy ending but noo..
Fantastic story if you look at it as just a story, but non-consent/rape and all that ain't my cup of tea so it wasn't interesting in that way.
Definetely going to check out your other stories, though..
By the way.. aren't you an admin or something on portkey?

wow that was great and i love the twist that is was barty jr the hole time .... i hope you do another with krum ... later for now

angel

Wow! This was really well written, particularly with regard to Cedric's dirty language. I never really had any interest in Barty Crouch Jnr but this has... woken me up to the possibilities shall we say?! The only thing I didn't like was not knowing the full identity of our bad guy from the outset: you'd think I would have figured out that it was Barty in disguise but I didn't so once I'd finished I had to read it again with my new-found knowledge and I preferred it on second reading. It occurred to me, that if you wanted, Barty wouldn't even need to disguise himself as Cedric because Harry and Hermione wouldn't recognise him anyway. However, it certainly adds an extra dimension knowing that Barty gets off on Hermione thinking he's someone else- someone she likes. Anyway, I realise this is simply a personal preference- I like to know what I'm picturing in my mind from the outset- so please don't take this as criticism. I really enjoyed the story and I hope you'll write another chapter- the ending leaves you hanging on for more developments!

another great story!!! Love the twist that it was Barty Jr. all along. It will be interesting if he do it again using the image of every triwizard champion.

Can't wait to read more of your works, are some of the best.

JO

Wow, that was absolutely amazing. I do hope that there will be more to come.