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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear god this is cliche.
Do you honestly expect two 17-years-olds to marry?
Christ..
Do you honestly expect two 17-years-olds to marry?
Christ..
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great ..andi hope there is more dumblebashing in the future ..and will the truth of what he did to snape come out and will snape change for the better when he finds out that he was played ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice story its very good...
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic..
Keep it up and update soon!!
Keep it up and update soon!!
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome i love it and putting veron in the psych ward and all the kids comming and tell the truth please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is such a great story, and that last chapter was absolutely priceless! you have come up with such a wondeful way to deal with the dursleys!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have only one comment - write faster!!!! Sleep is highly overrated. Seriously, what a great story. You are truly gifted. I can't wait to read the next chapter and it won't be tonight because it isn't posted yet.
keep it up (no pun intended)
Mark
keep it up (no pun intended)
Mark
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Considering the drought that us Aussies are going through atm... it's not that unlikely.. Seriously, since the drought started like, 6 years ago, we've been gradually cut of from excess water usage. Now, people who refuse to follow the water restrictions have their water cut back to a trickle..
Lol, enough about that... Your stories OKAY, but it's a bit too far out there(in my opinion). Events which are happening/happened, such as dumbledore being arrested without putting up a fight, are extremely improbable... The ooc is just goin too far in some characters-again, dumbledore.
Other than that, you have a good writin technique, alright storyline... and yeah
Keep on updatin!
Lol, enough about that... Your stories OKAY, but it's a bit too far out there(in my opinion). Events which are happening/happened, such as dumbledore being arrested without putting up a fight, are extremely improbable... The ooc is just goin too far in some characters-again, dumbledore.
Other than that, you have a good writin technique, alright storyline... and yeah
Keep on updatin!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the part where meditation induces wet dreams xD
I should try that...
But you overdid it on the 'Starvation', even the dursleys wouldn't go that far
I should try that...
But you overdid it on the 'Starvation', even the dursleys wouldn't go that far
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!!!