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I loved this story the first time around and after rereading it now, I love it just as much as before! I won't urge you to update because I know how annoying that can be, but I'll think it at least :D

I just finished reading up to the point where you left off and I must say I am really enjoying your story. Then I was sad to notice that you had not updated in 8 months...have you abandonded this story? do you still plan on updating? I would really like to read more so I hope that you will.

This is a good story, shame that you haven't updated it in while. Was good reading it, hope you finish it sometime

Ok - so one major issue (other than the fact that you really, really need to work on your scene transitions). You have it in this chapter that Mr. Dursley punches Harry in the gut - near or on the kidneys. Usually, if it's done by the right person, that kind of blow is FATAL. If kidneys are ruptured - which is very, very likely in this scenario, because of the size difference - the person bleeds out in a matter of less than 1/2 hr. That makes the entire scene unbelievable for me. That's unfortunate, because you've a decent premise here and it would be fun to see it more detailed and accurate.

Regards,

the_scribbler

hey, i love this story, but you havent updated it in forever.... it was going really well up until it stopped growing. please update!! i have to know how it ends!!!
thanks :D
-pyro

please continue the story and thank you

please continue the story please and thank you

Hey there, well written story. I look forward to seeing where you go from here. I'm glad you're having Harry actually use what he's gained (the Legimens skills for example). Good luck with your writing. Till next time.

Please update soon have just reread this and would really like to at least know that it is still a work in progress and hasn't been abandoned

bloody great storie keep it up.