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by Tumshie

person Graybear
schedule July 29, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Fantastic! I hope to see much more of this story in the future. A few minor spelling errors, but a good  premise nonetheless.

schedule March 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Excellent story, excellent writing.  MORE, MORE.  Please notify on updates.

person Anonymous
schedule September 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Nice story   Too bad it looks abandoned.   

schedule June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was just wondering if you were ever going to update this story.
person arrabella
schedule July 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just found this fic (not my normal ship) but I love it! I read all the cahppies in 1 go. Could you please let me know when you post more? I'd love to keep reading til the end.
Thanks
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am finding this story to be very interesting, I do hope that you are going to update soon! I find the whole plot to be great. Please do update soon, Thank you
schedule May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There is a counter curse to Sectumsempra because Snape uses it on Draco when Harry curses him with it in HBP. Supposedly, Snape invented it himself. Therefore it wouldn't necessarily have spread, although I can see the Death Eaters using it. You did have it right about Snape teaching it to Crabbe and Goyle.
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is one of the best FFs I EVER had the honor to read.
I realy enjoyed devouring every word.
I love especially Hary and Hermine getting that strong.
I hope they get to be prefekts though.
Dumbledore wont last as Headmaster much longer.
And as soon as Gonagall takes over...
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just got don reading all the chapters that you wrote so far and I hope that you be updating soon. I am looking forward to reading more of this story.
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting take on manipulative Dumblemort; liked the humorous slant on Moldieshorts that I haven't seen before. Hope to read more from you in this line.