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for Two for a Girl

by xamphira

person hugh_pym
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. I like a little twist at the end. I agree that the sex scene does seem to fizzle out a bit right at the end.
person L0v3rLy L@dY
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kinda weak at the end i think