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Really well written. Hermione seemed so utterly dark in this chapter. An angry, heartbroken, pregnant witch seems to be quite a force of nature doesn't she.

I've just finished reading chapters 1-22 and all I can say is fabulous. Absolutely fabulous.

agreed.

i absolutley love this story and can't wait for more!

Oh my gosh, that was awesome. I have read so many fics where Lucius kidnaps Hermione and she is always on the receiving end of his abuse. It's about time Hermione got to do the abusing! Great story, I've followed it from the beginning, keep up the good work.

this is great. i do hope you tell us what she does to him before Snape arrives.

This is great so far. I'm loving where you're is taking this. Please give swift updates. Sev and Hermione forever!!!

ALMOST!?!?!??!? He is as delicious as Snape... oh man, I'd give anything to be kidnapped by Luscious... hmm, lovely.

Thank you and I can't wait to read more!

i really strongly dislike nevill!!! it was inmature in the first place to put up the act, but it shows her age. even for revenge, taking a "mock" lover is a given for actually terminating the other relationship for true. even makinging it a gossip through speculation is better then actually kissing in front of others to make it "authentic". the charakter development before was wonderfull. i hope her behaviour can be explained by her pregnancy, otherwise i fear any real relationship between snape and her would be doomed. so if it explains her childish act, that leaves nevill to grow up already!
i know it sounds so negative, but i really, really like your fic. otherwise i wouldn't have bothered to review :-)

Intense. I do hope that Hermione will tell Severus about his baby soon before something really comes to a head between them.

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.