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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story but i must ask if you could add a little humor to the story, I think that it could really liven it up. You really could make silly little remarks about how Severus feels like a lecherous old bastard, or that Hermione is acting like a girl at a Backstreet Boys concert. just suggestions, don't hate me
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good! I liked Amy, even if she was a bit sneaky. Please update soon. Snow White Potion indeed!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the plot. Characters well in cannon and all the story line is great. Good job and now I'm hooked. Please update as soon as possible! And thank you for sharing your creativity
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very well done. I think I will miss Amy. Very Slytherin of Amy, to force someone to fall in love with snape, if that is what the potion does. I do hope most of it was caused by Hermoine herself and not a potion but all and all I am loving it, please update soon.
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:-)))
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good, I'm glad that Snape is missing Amy. At least it shows that he valued her friendship even though he didn't appreciate it during his school years. I liked her if you couldn't tell. VBG
Hermione better toughen up a bit if she is going to deal with Snape.
Hermione better toughen up a bit if she is going to deal with Snape.
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. I hope you will update often.
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Slytherin at heart, huh? Cliff hanger! This story touches me and your writing is excellent. Actually, rather original in its premise.
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very nice, quite imaginative. I hope you find time and inspiration to continue. I wish to find out how Snap realizes Amy and Granger connection, and Grangers various attempts to achieve the fullfilment of the promise.
You have quite a few character stories going too! Draco?! and Harry....and Ron. And what about Amy's death and James Potter.... I can't wait to read more, congrats!
You have quite a few character stories going too! Draco?! and Harry....and Ron. And what about Amy's death and James Potter.... I can't wait to read more, congrats!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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