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for A Sacrifice for Love

by SnapesSweetheart

person firewall
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7 - I like the direction this story has taken. Can't wait for more.
person Idril
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely great story! pleeease keep updating
person Bella Snape
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is getting funnier... Oh please let there be a Ron/Pansy scene... I've grown to like Ron over the past few weeks I just don't like him with Hermione.... so, please, let there be one!

And some Dramione wouldn't go amiss either!

BS!*HUGS*.
person m. majere
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't get enough of this story. Very romantic in a twisted sort of way. Fighting their feelings all the way. Great job. We all keep checking for updates. Happy New Year!
person Darque Hart
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7 -- Handsome, indeed! When men, boys, think of handsome, they do not invision this elusive quality in the same way a woman does. As you said of Pansy, "Pansy smiled and Hermione was surprised to find Pansy was very pretty when she smiled. She noticed that Ron had noticed as well." A simple thing like a smile can transform a face, and boys do like a pretty face! But an honest woman will tell you that "handsome" is a combination of smile, look in eye, the way a person carries themselves, sense of humor [however presented], and how the person in question treats you. It's not just a pretty face!

If I haven't said so before, I am enjoying your story.
person purrfus
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 6: Interesting twists and turns. The pacing of the story is excellent. The anticipation is wonderful - don't let it end too soon.
person sinbad
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like what I am reading. You are running hot!!
person OoOojabab
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really liked that you added some humor (or attempted too) into this chapter. Perhaps use a little more of that snarky British dry wit...
person Cruel Angel
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapters!
They make me laugh and cry at the same time!
You're a wonderful author!

person Kris
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, I see a little problem here. A certain book is still out in the common room.