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for A Sacrifice for Love

by SnapesSweetheart

person Me&Rossi
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH NO WHERE"S HERMIONE??? I'm still liking the story, update soon

me&rossi
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! Come on already, please?

Oh, and I'm confused; I got the impression that Draco wasn't interested in Pansy and wanted Hermione and now he say's that she's his girlfriend even though a couple of chapters ago he didn't want anything to do with her... so, please clear this up... I do want Ron to have her though.

But please get the lemons going please?
person carolrain
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very, very enjoyable fiction. I like the way everyone stays in character while evolving, and how you detail their new reactions to people and situations. The idea of a Snow White potion is logical, too. It's a pity Amy had to go, but I suppose she'll show up again via her book. And it's always fascinating to catch a glimpse of the teenage Snape. Will Draco get Pansy back? It's the first time I ever liked her. It's true, she's underestimated and slagged off by everyone.

Now, about that kiss between Hermione and Snape--will anything come of it?

Please keep writing!
person Cruel Angel
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aah, tears, tears, tears,...
Please, write more, soon !!!!
person Darque Hart
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please, don't use song lyrics. pleeeeease. Other than the fact that the song only means something to those that have ever heard it ... but can anyone picture Severus Snape wallowing in self-depreciating misery with song lyrics wafting through his head???
person amsev
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just re-read chapter 9 -- you ended on a bit of a cliffie -- Please update soon! I'm loving this story.
person pickles87
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter.
i'm glad draco and harry had a small chat before all of that. waiting for more. hurray hurray.
person Bella Snape
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story. I have told you that haven't I?

I hope you do have Ron/Pansy, I love that couple.

Is that citrus I smell for the next chapter?
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! Thank you.
person Cruel Angel
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again a wonderful chapter that brought me tears and smiles.
The story gets moremagical every day!
You're great!