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Chapters 11-25: Wonderful story! I liked the ghost elements of Amy and her 'lover' talking and then behind them, Godric and Salazar manipulating the ghosts. Layers upon layers and they all worked out beautifully. You did a lovely job on the smut and the tension-filled dance of love that Severus and Hermione indulged in was drawn out perfectly. It was cute how you gave Neville an important place in your story and he stayed true to canon.

The surprise was Lucius Malfoy who came out of nowhere and tried to rape Hermione. He was certifiably crazy so it was as well that Hermione turned out to have such power. I mourned his role since he's my all-time favorite character and he was so cold and evil in this. His passion for Hermione was weird and unsettling. He was really nuts, I guess. Too bad - such a waste of a gorgeous man *snerk*. Poor Draco didn't find anyone, but give him time.

I enjoyed your story immensely. Thank you for sharing this and completing it. Kudos to you.

Chapters 1-10: I've come late to this story and it is already completed, which reassures me. I'll be reading the rest and reviewing again, but I just wanted to pause here and let you know how much I am enjoying this story. I'm amazed that this is your first story because it is excellent. You've given us good backstories on the main characters, provided strong reasons for the things they do, and let us see their insecurities and the way they all feel about each other. The plot is intriguing and singular. I feel sorry for Amy and as usual I feel nothing but contempt for Sirius Black and James Potter. Not my favorite characters.

I see you've now written other stories. I don't spend much time in the Harry/Draco section or here in the Snape/Hermione section. My favorite character is Lucius Malfoy and I'm found over in the Lucius/Hermione section. When I finish this I may select one of your Harry/Draco stories as a lovely change of pace. It should be easy to read if what I've been experiencing of your writing so far is any indication. **Waves** Back to your story.

Very nice story. I took chelleybelle's recommendation and came over here. Good story.

I really like this story lot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This was the cutest story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Super job! Though it would have been nice if you had told us who Amy ended up with! I kept thinking Sirius! Lol!

The highest compliment I can pay is that Hermionie remained Hermionie and Severus reamined Severus. Good job!

Excellent story. I read it twice. Enjoyed it as much as the canon.

Wow, that was a wonderful story. Im glad i took the time to read it. At the end though i couldnt quite figure out who was with Amy. I think it was hinting twords dumbledor? The age difference and the cover up thing. I couldnt remember if you actually put who it was in the fic. I hope Draco finds his soul mate and then the story would truly be complete. Loved the story. Keep the muse happy, write more.

I love this story! I love Hermione and Snape together. You also did a great job with Ron. I usually can't stand him because he is so whiny and useless, but in this story you have turned him into a stud! Good job! I am glad that so far Ginny is not in this story. You did mention the masterbation scene where he thought of her, but maybe she won't ever wake up and you could give Pansy to Harry. I think that they would make a great pair. I love Draco, ! Great job! I love it! I just finished chapter 9 so I will let you know again how I am liking it!

I just finished your story, I loved it! I liked what you did to Lucius. He deserved it. It is sad that Draco wound up alone though...he needed someone. Maybe you could write your next story with him meeting someone and falling in love...and of course Neville needs someone also...