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for Limits of Our Sight

by belladonnacordial

person Dreamwind (who is too lazy to log in...)

schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM

please keep writing this story. I want to know what happens with Draco's plotting!

person Kateri

schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Very interesting idea, well done.

person ladyliver

schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM

It was a bit rushed, and the characterization of Snape was abit off, but overall it served for a quick amusement.
Good job with the crazy twists.
I feel like the plot could be elaborated into something amazing though, even novel length, with abit of suspense as opposed to such snap reactions.
A DM/HP/SS love triangle!
Brilliant.

person Amarilis

schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM

nice one please write more and happy new year!!

person snape's coming

schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM

very well done!

person meg

schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Aww, that was cute! You should add one more chapter!! It would be awesome, but that was a great ending if that was really the last chapter. Good job!! I want to read more of your stories! Keep up the good work!

person Anon

schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM

well forget about draco now... that bastard... they were all using each other
crazy story, would love to read more

person Hambares

schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Such screwed up men! I hope they get it right in the end!

person R.A.B.

schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM

For our sake I wish you had written the sceen between Harry and Draco but see why you did it that way. I like the play with the pov, appearances, blindfold, glasses, and all that limits sight. Snape knowing even less happiness is sad but probly true.

person anodominic

schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM

"Or maybe I can just let Draco be happy for a week. That seems more than fair. What did I get? A couple of hours this afternoon?"

Pretty cold on Harry's part. People do get that way.

Ouch... just ouch.

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