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for New Years Eve Against the Dark Arts.

by DarkLady

schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know I have always loved this one shot. I read it a long time ago and never left a review. Sorry about that. :(

Tonight though, I was looking over some old stories and I saw this again. I cannot believe how rude that anonymous review was. It outraged me! Who the hell do they think they are? And who is that crazy, Jesus will get you person. I know this happened a long time ago, but there are some really weird people out there!

Anyhoo, I just wanted to tell you that I think you write a lovely Lucius. And I thought this little romp was a lot of fun. This was an excellent oneshot my dear! Sorry it took me so long to tell you.
person Anon
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
> wonderful! brilliant! delicious!! err your other reviewers I think stopped by here on their way to "I'm a complete
> fuckwit forum." *snickers* and I do not believe they actually know what a mary sue is :D

Yeah ... but you know what a Mary Sue is, because the 'Hermione' in your story is a Mary Sue, too. This is, because she is you. Just with another name. And how do I know that? That's easy. Because Hermione would not get fucked voluntarily by the Malfoys or Zabini. Get a live and a good fuck, so you don't have to write such shit. ROFL. You are one hell of a stupid women.

And yeah, they were on the way to "I'm a complete fuckwit forum." The name of the forum is The Dark Mark. Stupid whore!
person Jesus will get you
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jesus will get you, for writing this stuff. This is evil.
person LaBibliographe
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, THAT was hot. First chapter and they've already played "hide the horcrux hard-on" and drawn blood. Those two certainly work fast. They've gone at it before apparently, so is there going to be any flashback to their first encounter? If Lucius is running (not so) tame at Grimmauld Place, why is Harry still angry at him? I guess all will be revealed in future chapters. Great start, my computer screen is still smoking a bit from the sexual heat. More please...
person BuffyXO
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One word: HOT! I think that Lucius could have said, "I am not opinionated, I'm just always right," and it would be in character. However, I loved the lines that you did use. Congratulations on a wonderfully executed challenge met.
person Cara
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww...Bad Harry! To interrupt such a moment.....Exellent fic! I just love it!
person angel
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome i love it ... and that is one hell of away to bring in the new years ... later for now

angel