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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ead upto chapter 3
Very intruiging and rather inspired.
From what I gatjher in my uneducated thoughts is that somehow
Severus and Hermoine have a psychic link and a astral physical one on the side.
Well that's my guess. A rather uninformed and vauge one at that.
A rathe erotic readf sofar nice tastefull and intruiging!
Very intruiging and rather inspired.
From what I gatjher in my uneducated thoughts is that somehow
Severus and Hermoine have a psychic link and a astral physical one on the side.
Well that's my guess. A rather uninformed and vauge one at that.
A rathe erotic readf sofar nice tastefull and intruiging!
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
now that was interesting. how did that happen and now what will happen? please don't keep us in supence for too long! :)
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, greatness all around for this one. Though I can't believe you left it there. How about some more?
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this story is so good! And your a new author too? Well you've got LOADS of potential, this story is amazing. I think your capturing Snape really well. The only thing I would critique was that the last chapter was very short. Longer chapters will keep your readers more interested =) Please update soon, I'm dying to know what happens =P
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Perhaps in the detention, Hermione could wear a short skirt and her blouse unbuttoned to the top of her bra or something.... But I'd like to read a visualisation of Snape's dream before the detention.
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a mean way to leave that chapter haning!!! lol. I was looking foward to what would happe. Please hurry and write the next chapter I can't wait!!!!
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh you have me captivated and i really want to read more! i do hope that you lots more for this story planned and i also hope that is long and updated soon! ;)
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and you are going to make me wait to find out what happens. great-just GREAT! well do post again soon. :)