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by magicmint

person mandy-jg
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god! That was absolutely wonderful! You must write more of this, I would love love love to read it!
person Pamela
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was good. Now I want to read more. Are you going to update soon? Are you going to continue the story? I sure hope so. Who is Harry's gf by the way?
person slackjack
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good Show!
Me like very very much
Jolly good show....

Well written...the words slowly increase the tension. And you didn't just make them do it and end it there.
The 'Parvati and Lavender' part was an excellent stimulant to initiate the plot.

Im looking forward to a sequel...
person Rayder04
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Quite good story!! Love the kinkyness in Hermione and I really hope to read another chapter soon. Maybe Hermione can return the favor?

JO
person Victoria
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow. that was amazing. Please let there be more wonderful hot sex. Please!!
person Hermyone
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cracking start, good story line that is really well written. Looking forward to more.
person TiffANY
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very HOT & sexy!

This story has a lot of potential

You have brilliant grammar and as long as there aren
person Anon
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. update soon.
person Galion
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue the story it was quite good.
person Stella
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was extremely well written and quite enjoyable. I hope you continue to write this, as I believe it would be an interesting read. Harry, with a girlfriend? and Ron? What will happen to poor old Ron.

Please continue!