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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was actually extremely good, and pretty touching. I would love to see a sequel, but beggars can't be choosers. Great writing, and thanks for the read.
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December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was rediculously hot!! i want more please
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April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
April 8, 2010
OMG - HOT, HOT, HOT story!! I loved it. It really worked on so many levels! I could see these two...our favorite couple...getting it on just like that and you detailed it perfectly. Hermione's 'uptightness' works *for* her in this case and makes the release just that much sweeter - which is something you captured beautifully. You should be very pleased with this and I hope like mad that you write more!!
Regards,
the_scribbler
OMG - HOT, HOT, HOT story!! I loved it. It really worked on so many levels! I could see these two...our favorite couple...getting it on just like that and you detailed it perfectly. Hermione's 'uptightness' works *for* her in this case and makes the release just that much sweeter - which is something you captured beautifully. You should be very pleased with this and I hope like mad that you write more!!
Regards,
the_scribbler
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story, and hope you updates soon. it doesnt appear as if you're in need of a beta.
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT! THIS story is a keeper!! I can't wait to read more please hurry and update.
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story. Nothing is hotter than H/Hr, especially when its forbidden. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE THIS! IT IS TOO GOOD TO LET BECOME LOST IN WIP LAND!
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done so far. I look foreword to seeing where you take this.
If I may make one small suggestion, you may want to refrain from indenting your paragraphs. It's not really necessary, and to me at least, detracts from the flow of the read. Just a suggestion and not a criticism, we all have our own styles of writing after all.
PA
If I may make one small suggestion, you may want to refrain from indenting your paragraphs. It's not really necessary, and to me at least, detracts from the flow of the read. Just a suggestion and not a criticism, we all have our own styles of writing after all.
PA
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please write more! That was perfect. ooohhh I can't wait for you to update. Harry's incredibly hot in this story and Hermione's one sexy witch. Well done, best story I've read in a long time. We need more people like you. update update update!! NOW!
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok update soon pleases your story was soo good there arent many out there so be proud