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by Julianne

schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...Harry's a girl? Oh, PLEASE still let him have his...well, his manhood! Or, OH! (here I go) What if he only had his manhood at night, and like...no bits during the day? And, at night, his breasts went away too! Because, really, not to be mean, but that's just defeating the purpose of a harry/draco story.

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person Vittani
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey i thought it was good, and i usually completely avoid Harry changing into a girl fics. So please update. N by the way dont know if anyones told you but in the first chapter you use the word "wood" instead of "would" three times or so. But thats just a nit pick.
person anon
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good!
person momoko
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it
person vibora
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kinda hurried but has potential ^_^ update soon
person Melodelic
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Nice big cliffie, but I still like it! Please continue and update as soon as possible.
person ice owl
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not really sure where this is going but it was discocerting to find that you do not know the difference between would and wood. Then the whole name thing sort of got out of hand, yes? By the time I was finished reading all the names I was thinking she should just jump out of the closet wearing a tee shirt that read MARY SUE: Master of the Universe.
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Isn
person Kira342
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue!