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by ccino49

schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is good... its always good! Can't wait for details on what she is wearing! lol!!!
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy for Remus. He's one of my very favorites. Snape caught up in someone outside of himself is fascinating as are the phoenix.

I sent you an email w/the whole chapter just in case there was a glitch somewhere. Thanks for sharing. Pitt
person forever yours
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
could this get any better?
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done. It was great that she left Greyback a hobbleing old man not able to hurt anyone. I think it would only be fitting if Remus kept the puppy. It's so nice that him an Tonks can finally be together. Maybe we need a little bit of them on their own together when they get the chance to be by them selves. I loved all of Severus's reactions from them having to bind him. to him collapsing in the chair, to runnig outside. Keep up the good writing!

Sansa
person Miepje
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*lol* Nina really loved her wine. I really loved the lemons ^^
That was so mean of Albus and Severus; not telling Nina that Severus can now block spells before using AK-ing him. And she certainly got mad!
And finally the full moon! I'm glad it all went well. And I'm so happy for Remus! And Tonks of course ^^

Loving it and looking forward to more (especially the visit to the MoM) ~Miepje
person Dixie50
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great idea making Argus Filtch a father figure type. Snape needs another man to talk frankly to him as he is being such an arse.
person Dixie50
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30. hot hot hot !
person Dixie50
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 32. the baked bean incident was very funny.Almost as good as her giving Severus a wedgie early in the story.
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still making us wait for the warewolf thing. You naughty girl. Wow, such a small girl can do some major damage. It is a good thing that blessing worked, that was a big risk to take. I will be looking forward to see how what the pheonix's did to her will help her with her fight with the dark.

Sansa
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad he finaly gave in, and quit being a jerk. Can't wait until tomorrow and the full moon!

Sansa