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by ccino49

person Miepje
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So they are going to get married! *yay* I hope Poppy and Minerva don't get too carried away with planning. ^^ Nina sending them to talk to Severus was really funny.
But those Gryffindors *argh* they are such prats! I hope there is a (very!) good reason for them to act like that. If not... well then they are really horrible friends.
The holiday was great, with the dolphins, swimming and the smut!

Loved the updates. Thanks! ~Miepje
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A wedding. How fun! I would really like to smack the trio and Jinny in the head. What is still up with them? I know that they don't like Severus, but come on, this is rediculous. They just need to get over it. Even if they don't like him, they could still be nice to her.
Sansa
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the changes, very smooth. I'm still plugging away, iced in today. Just sent the kiddies (both large and small) to the barn to play. They were driving me nuts. Good work girl! Pitt
person Miepje
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*wow* No more soul-sucking dementors!
And that was some experience in that special room with all those creatures. Is Nina now ready to finish off Scaly? *yay*

Great chapter. Thanks! ~Miepje
person zafaran
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Phooey, I ran out of more chapters to read. I like this story, and I'm looking forward to finding out what happens in the rest of the chapters. Will we find out why Harry and the other's are shunning her? I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran{at}fastmail{dot}fm
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, the dementors are no more! All is right in the world again. Well, almost. All we need now is scaley out of the way. Maybe Nina can take care of that before Draco has to take the mark. I know she told him he wouldn't have to, so maybe that is how she can take care of it. How are they controling the prisoners in Azkaban now? It was nice that Nina released all those souls before she did in the dementors. Wow, I'd have been totally creeped out in that room! It is a good thing other forces seemed to be controling the couple, because I surly don't think I'd have been in the mood in there. Just thinking of those monster things sucking on fingers gives me the willies. Looking forward to whats next.
Sansa
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Blaize is still such a jerk. He was going to rape her. It should have broken off! So, if someone just touches Nina, and they think of going to another place, they can just appear there, even if she is asleep? Just wondering because Severus went from the infirmary to their rooms, carrying Nina while asleep. Dementors next. Yick! Can't wait to read about that encounter.
Sansa
person Apryl
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I've not been around much. Ahh, Easter! Now I want some chocolate :( I think Blaize will be leaving Nina alone from now on. Looks like the "golden trio" are still on the sh*t list?
person Apryl
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Help! I'm a fish"? I thought you were having us on. Especially with the comment about Rickman. But I looked up on IMDB. Funny, I never heard of it. Thanx for the email...Really freaked out the hubby, Hee-Hee! "You've been reading that Harry Pot-head again?!?" --rolls eyes-- It's even worse when he purposely mis-pronounces Hermione's name.--angry growl-- Apryl 8D
person Miepje
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Seems that Scaly is a bit rattled; that's very nice ^^
That little creep Blaise did it again! Nina gave him the same choice as Scaly; but I hope she won't let him close again whatever he chooses. I mean; he doesn't seem feel the least bit sorry... (just in pain)
It's good to see that even tho Severus and Nina still make mistakes, lose their temper, etc, they don't take very long to make it up to each other anymore.

Thanks for the great update! ~Miepje