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by ccino49

schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Noooo! it can't be over not yet please keep going dont end it not now, Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee,'
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't beleive it is over! You certainly had an ending I didn't expect. I knew she couldn't kill him. Severus certainly had no problem. It was so sad that no one remembered her! She certainly did well for herself and her son. I was really afraid at the end knowing Severus that he wouldn't go with her. It was very sad that she lost her magic too. I was so glad at the end that Severus was allowed to remember her. Excellent song choice! That song was the perfect one. I, the "question princess" (I don't think I have ever been called a princess before) still have questions, but alas, since it is over, I will refrain from asking them. OK, just one. You will let me know when you post your next story, won't you? Pretty please. Great job on this story. I will miss little Nina and her Severus!

Lets see if the third time is the charm, I keep loosing my internet connection before I can get this posted.

Sansa
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ccino: Crap, I've erased my review about 10 times now because I don't want to give anything away. Don't second guess yourself. Go for it. Pitt
person Miepje
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*yay* Scaly is very dead! I'm so happy he is. I can understand that Nina could not kill him after she made him harmless, and I can also understand that Severus could and did.
Now they can get married and live their own lives.

I'm looking the next (and final) chapter, but I will be sad to see this story end. I've had a great time reading it! ~Miepje
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, it is finally done. I didn't figure she could actually kill him, but Severus had no problem. Guess we need to have a party now, then a wedding. Still need to know what is going on with the trio! Great job on this story!
Sansa
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A vacation, how nice for them. I am jealous. A whole beach all to themselves. I bet Nina made Filtch's year. I am glad you make him nice in your story. Lucious (one of these days I may remember to how to spell his name) is still a pig. I would imagine after what the sneaky bastard just witnessed that he will be switching sides. Or wil he use his knowledge to gain favor with Scaley? I STILL want to know what the heck is wrong with the trio!
Sansa
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
R we going to find out why Harry Ron and Hermione ain't talking to Nina? I don't know what i'll do when u finish the story...
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I guess Severus really did pick up some of Nina's powers in that room since he now knows everything that happens to her. That is kind of cool. Tonight is the big night! Can't wait to read about Scaley's end. Is she really going to kill him though, since she did say no one was going to die. I'm sure she could come up with some kind of worse punishment than death. Lingering suffering would be good for him. I have been having internet trouble, if it isn't working tomorrow, so I can read your next chapter, I will have to cry.
Sansa
person Miepje
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it sweet that Nina asked Argus to give her away. And Draco will make a good best man.
And now Draco (and Lucius) knows Nina is the Assimilator. I wonder what will happen when Scaly comes for the marking-ceremony.

And Lucius is such a letch *tsk*

Loved it, more please?! ~Miepje
person Apryl
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, that Lucius!! Talk about a perv. Well Draco sure got the surprise of his life. Somehow, I got the feeling after last chapter (the vacation) that Miss Nina might be in the family way. Can't explain it, just a vibe I've got.