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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Jen618 and Shaheena. Only managed to get a beta for later chapters. Glad your reading and enjoying though.
I tend to write how I speak and speak as I think, just concentrating on what I need to say rather then how it should be said. But thats me. lol. Please keep reviewing. It's always apreciated.
ccino
I tend to write how I speak and speak as I think, just concentrating on what I need to say rather then how it should be said. But thats me. lol. Please keep reviewing. It's always apreciated.
ccino
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi ccino,
I'm reading now! I can see you're finished but wanted to say hi and drop a line. It is an interesting story, but it would be better with a beta.
I'm reading now! I can see you're finished but wanted to say hi and drop a line. It is an interesting story, but it would be better with a beta.
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still a great story! Please please please find a proofreader--your plot is too good to get hung up on grammatical errors!
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am almost at a loss for words......
this was an amazing journey that you led us on, and all the characters were so alive and full of energy ( okay,I'm miffed at the 'golden trio's" grumps, but then Gryff's never will get along with Slitherins....)the ending was almost anti-climatic, but done wonderfully and elequently. I was in tears when Nina was fading away in the (almost) Loved the Epi....big suprise after all the shagging a baby!!! lol....
I hope that more people read the 'Main Canon Charater" + "OC" sections more often, they are a fresh and delightful escape from muggle day to day.
all the best!
Sky
this was an amazing journey that you led us on, and all the characters were so alive and full of energy ( okay,I'm miffed at the 'golden trio's" grumps, but then Gryff's never will get along with Slitherins....)the ending was almost anti-climatic, but done wonderfully and elequently. I was in tears when Nina was fading away in the (almost) Loved the Epi....big suprise after all the shagging a baby!!! lol....
I hope that more people read the 'Main Canon Charater" + "OC" sections more often, they are a fresh and delightful escape from muggle day to day.
all the best!
Sky
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far, good plot. Could use some editing for grammar and spelling.
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked everything about the story but the ending. Frankly, any 'gods' who would punish someone for not being willing to kill an unarmed, helpless person who has no ability to protect themselves....... should be destroyed.
They are simply idiots, and should be ABHORRED, because they are as bad as Voldemort ever was.
They are simply idiots, and should be ABHORRED, because they are as bad as Voldemort ever was.
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I too had been having internet troubles. Well, if your aim was to shock us with an unpredictable ending, I believe you have hit your mark. It's almost 8:30am on this side of the pond... a bit early to be crying like this....BBL, Apryl
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a really heartbreaking turn of events. First you made me cry and then I was so happy that Severus remembered. Gods and Goddesses can be such fickle bitches!
Well, almost sixty chapters with Nina and Severus' ups and downs, steamy smut and adventures with creatures. I enjoyed reading it a lot. And thank you for making Severus remember at the end, else I would have been sobbing the rest of the day ^^ ~Miepje
Well, almost sixty chapters with Nina and Severus' ups and downs, steamy smut and adventures with creatures. I enjoyed reading it a lot. And thank you for making Severus remember at the end, else I would have been sobbing the rest of the day ^^ ~Miepje
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm crying now! I loved it. I loved how they got together at the end. I'm glad i went looking for harry potter fan fic that night! Because i really loved this story. I haven't read any others.
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic story. I've been in love with this story since the first chapter. You have such a talent for detail and amazing plots. You seem to remember the little things that were mentioned in the beginning and form into even greater things later in the story. I love this story and I hope that you continue to write stories as great as this one. I'm begging PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL!!!!!!!