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You left it at such a sad part -sniff- Please update soon!!!

Well, a little ciff hanger. Where did she go, I hope they can find her. Uncle Pete just made me hate him even more. Severus needs to hurt him really bad. The Aunt needs some hurting too, for letting it go on. I guess Jane's heritage needs to be brought out before the beating up can begin.

Can I ask one favor? Could you please put new people's dialouge in a different paragraph? Sometimes it is hard to tell who is talking, because the sentences run together, and sometimes they lack quotation marks.

Still loving this story. Will be looking forward to updates.

PS: Maybe I misunderstood, but I don't have any stories posted. If you want to read a good one though, Pittwitch, that also left you a review has a good one posted in your same catagorie called Ancient Madgic.

An interesting story and a great read. Severus' and Jane's banter is really funny and that wedgie made me lmao.
I hope that when they get to the farm, something unpleasant will happen to that horrible uncle.

Looking forward to more!

Oh, you stopped too soon. I want more! Can you make them give Uncle Pete what he deserves in the next chapter? Maybe just hurt him a little bit. Maybe a lot. Definantly no unicorn calming glow for him. Maybe a good unforgivable. More soon please.

The "assimilator" huh? Things are becoming more clear. Now I get your title. I look forward to the staff reaction to this. I loved her hanging onto Snape's robes. I could just imagine his disgust with that. I loved the unicorns. Please update soon!

OK, I still want to know exactly what Jane is. Hey, if no one can curse her, and she can bounce their curses back at them, she could be the secret weapon in the war. Please update soon.

OMG Severus w/a wedgie, LMAO!

I am still reading. Please keep going. Short review. Christmas cookies are calling.

Well, I for one think that you should continue. I kind of liked your story. Obviously Jane has some kind of connection that she doesn't know about with the wizarding world. I will look forward to finding out what it is. Your story was quite whitty and humorous. Please update soon. I will keep my eye out for it.