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Oh, poor little Nina, always so confused and thinking she is doing the wrong thing. Maybe Severus could run (Ok, maybe stride boldly) to her and comfort her. Explain he didn't mean to be such a jerk, but he has got a rep to protect. Hopefully the kids will get to explain why their sides where splitting. Please don't make her run into Malfoy.If she does I hope she would realise his intentions are not good. She could really use a boost to her self esteem, and some goodness in her life for a while. Please update very soon!

Oh, what a cliff hanger you left us with! I will be waiting on the edge of my seat to see what happens in the Malfoy study. Glad to see the Aunt and Uncle got some kind of punishment. Jane touched mouldy voldy, does that mean she knows all of his secrets now? Harry will be happy to know the pressure is off of him now. Kali is a neat character. Anyone would be lucky to have her look out for them. Severus getting himself a young wife weather he wants it or not, wonder how she will feel about that too. I hope this encounter will bring Jane out of her current state of mind.

Thanks for changing your formatting. That made your chapters much easier to read. Keep up the good work.

The best fan fic I have ever read! Makeover, Helion, angst, romance, everything!!!! Omg! do not let this fan fic die! I don't know if you still check your comments but this thing is DAMN GOOD!

Just had time to check back in. I love Kali. I feel that the house elves know a heck of a lot more than they lete on, all the time! Thanks for sharing, Pitt

Awsome scene with the Dark Lord. I think he has finally met his match. I do believe Nina has made herself quite an enemy though. Ahhh, Severus is in love, how sweet. Good for him. Nice that Nina finally has some comforts in life after living on the streets, and that slimey farm house. More please.

Holy shit! this is serriously like one of the best fanfictions I've EVER read. ooh its good me like me like alot!1 Ecspecially when she grabbed voldermorts arm

okay this story is now on my favorites and serriously if you do not update soon, I am probably going to die of boredom! keep it coming please

wat the hell/ why did u leave me hanging there at chapter six! r u kidding me? omg!!!!!

Oh, evil cliffie!!

Great update. Severus' reaction to Kali when she told him he would "become one" with Jane/Nina was fun to read. *lol*
But now they are in BIG trouble. I hope they will come out of this in one piece.

Poor Jane; feeling guilty and less for something she didn't do, but was done to her (damn that uncle). I hope they find her soon. More please!