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As usual you stopped too soon! I always seem to want more, more, more. You did a very good job showing Nina/Jane's utter terror. I am glad that Severus could show Hermionee some appreciation, even if she can't tell anybody. I do hope Nina will be able to forgive the two of them. For not being able to check over your work, you did a pretty good job. Although, I may not be the best person to tell you that, as you can obviously tell from reading my reviews, my spelling sucks.

Since you told me you like Ancient Magic, please go and leave a review for it. If Pittwitch doesn't get 5 new reviewers, she said she won't post anymore. After reading for 60 some chapters, I really really need to know how it ends.

Please update soon!

When I first started reading this story I thought you were a therapist or perhaps had a friend who went through this kind of horror. The depth of feeling behind your writing is not something one can simply imagine. I realize now that it hits much closer to home for you. As hard as it was for you to write this chapter, take heart in knowing that writing can be a good form of therapy. Also, you might encourage someone else who feels alone and suffering to seek out help. I do believe that only those of us who have actually experienced a nervous breakdown, regardless of the type of trauma, will truely be 'upset' by it. Others may be shocked by this chapter, but won't quite feel it down to the core like those who have been through it. Please continue this story to it's end and find peace for yourself in completing it. Apryl

*lol* Harry fainted. Well, it was quite a shock the trio got ^^

*phew* Severus' temper caused some big hurt and troubles. That was a very emotional chapter. Poor Nina; I hope Severus can get through to her and that she will be okay.

(and my nickname? Well, it's Dutch and I don't really know how to explain the pronunciation ^^)

I hope you take my previous commets as a compliment then as that uneasiness was your intention. Good show! Poor Harry, he does end up on the floor a lot doesn't he?

This was a moving chapter. Nina and Severus's lives have changed so greatly in a week. It is very understandable how it would be so hard for Nina to accept and take it all in. It is nice to see Severus being so tender towards her. I liked the kids revultion to the new relationship, and wonder at what Nina can do. It seems as if she forgave them, so hopefully they can be freinds now. Hopefully Severus can handle them being friends. Post more soon please.

I am enjoying your writing thoroughly. I think you've captured Nina's timidity quite well. Just as a personal comment, not really a criticism, but from my own tastes, I would like to read of a more complex development of the relationship between Nina and Severus, right now it is feeling a bit forced and rushed to me, but, then again, that may be your intention ... sorry, just my insignificant rambling.

Voldie got quite a shock! And I loved Severus' and Nina's first kiss; it was very sweet. And that kiss in front of the whole school *grin*
I could just picture Albus crawling from behind his desk ^^
I'm a bit worried about Draco's plans and I hope Nina will find out what he is up to soon.
Thanks for the updates!

And another chapter already! Poor Nina running away again. And Severus going after her, again ^^ Calling himself "the vampre" *lol* and telling Nina he loves her was very nice.

Loved it and looking forward to more!

I love the fic, it's just so much fun to read and Nina is a cool character. The only thing that is really starting to bug me is Snape's vocabulary. He's always swearing! fuck, fucking, shit etc.... it's just weird and I just can't imagine it from him. Sure every once in a while if the situation is extreem but it's like every paragraph. I know you are probably thinking I'm a prude for pointing out such a small foible but I really think that it's disturbing the validity of his character. It just seems too Crass for him.
I really do love the story though, and can't wait to see what the order makes of her.

Well, that was a pretty good forbidden forest chapter. All those spiders are so very creepy. The pink mist and floating was pretty neat. You stopped too soon though. I wanted to see the conversation between Severus and Nina after Severus made his revelation. Guess I will just have to wait. Darn! I want more soon!