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for Assimilation

by ccino49

person Sansa
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Snape waddleing, what a sight that would be. He sure did deserve it. He would have had to pay for the ass paddleling too. Loved that you brought Fred and George in, they are such fun characters. Glad you had Tonks interacting with Nina too. Thank gosh someone finally shut that stupid picture up! The order will be forever indepted for that. Poor Remus with tears in his eyes, exactly what did she do to him to cause everyone elses reaction. More please.
person LiquidFire
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it! 100% and then some. So much so that I refuse to close the screen, simply refresh the page three (or four, or five...) times a day to see if another chapter is up yet. :D
person Apryl
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm ok, Still here! I don't get to do much reading on the weekends and even less reviewing. Call me a chicken, but if I were in Severus' shoes I would have had Poppy explain "the morning hard-on" and other embarassing reactions of the male anatomy.
person Sansa
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Snape snores! I loved it when he fell off the couch. If I were Nina, I would hex him good for that broom ride. Although, she is only 17, maybe she will decide it was great.

Um, alternate endings would be just fine, but I certainly would not be opposed to a sequal.

As usual, I crave more. Write quick.
person pittwitch
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Severus with a sense of humor. And he really is trying, isn't he!
person Miepje
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The latest chapters were wonderful again. Nina needs to work through a lot, but Severus seems to be helping her (when he's not being jealous ^^). The last bit made lmao; it was good to see them have fun together. A great read. Thank you!

(it's more like "meep ye" *lol*)
person Sansa
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
But...I want a happy ending. These poor tourtured souls need a happy ending. At least a little happy. I do have one question. Is this girl going to be strong enough to the ultimate end? Or will she crumble and fall? She seems to be able to prevail in other bad situations, but when it gets emotional she looses it. She better get over all of the reckage from her former life, or Harrry better be ready to step up to the plate again. I do still love your story though. Keep up the good writing.
person skye
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh but this is a wonderful read! I've read all 15 chapters today in one shot ( not counting lunch and supper.) bravo and calmly waiting for more....
person Sansa
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kali. I glad she is back with Nina. Glad to see Nina with some girl freinds having some fun. Loved all of Sevrus's thoughts in the library trying to get rid of the girls. Can't wait to hear the conversation in the office. Post soon.
person pittwitch
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, you sure let ol' Sev off the hook with that one - amnesia, nice. Keep up the good work. And, don' worry, I couldn't not finish mine - it's too close to the end now. Pitt