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by ccino49

person Renee
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I've read them all so far..... What am i goin to do now! I have to wait until u write another!!!! Will Snape ever relise that it may not be good for him to tell her what to do as such? I guess u could call it emotional abuse.. Does he relise? Will he relise?
person pittwitch
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a lot to process in one chapter. Will have to read more than once! Keep it going! Pitt
person Sansa
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Those girls need kicked out on their cans. Expell them! Now, imagine this next sentence being said in a very whiney voice. But.... I wanted to hear Kali's explanation. Meanie, stopping in the middle again. It is a good thing you post quickly. Can I have the next chapter right now please?

Hey, we both got stars from Pitt. Yay! I didn't want you to have to sulk for a week. Go team.
person Sansa
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ask and you shall receive. I finished the last review, and there was another chapter. Wow, there is way more to this than I thought. All that assimilator history. It would be really nice if Nina could cure Remus, but I surely wouldn't want to summon Fenir. That gives me the heebeegeebees just thinking about it. I'm sure that if she can stand up to the dark lord, she could stand up to him though. Severus better lighten up a little, or he is really going to scare the crap out of Nina. Keep up the good work.
person Sansa
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a mean little cliff hanger. Nina needs to kick some serious butt! Those bully girls need to be afraid, very afraid! That should be quite interesting. I just love Kali, that little elf can sure hold her own. More soon please.

Hey, I don't know if I know Pitt's answer, but I made my guess. Snape could read the book, because he and Mikayla are married, so he is part of the gypsy family, and can read it. I feel bad for making her doubt herself.
person Katha
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi

I started reading your story yesterday and I really LOVE it.
Especially the character of Nina.. she seems to be so fragile and so strong at the same time...though I like it more when she is fragile :)

I hope your not planning on letting her have an affair with Lupin as well.. wouldnt like that... and Severus wouldn't aprove as well ;)

Hope to read more from you soon.

Best wishes
Katha
person Miepje
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow; fat Severus, spanking, werewolves, a smitten Moody, and Nina and Severus getting a lot closer. Lots happened and I absolutely loved it all!
I'm curious about what will happen when Nina meets Remus with the next full moon. I hope she will be able to help him somehow.
More please!?
person SnapesBabe
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this alot... I'm finding it better than the books. I stayed up all night and read this and am still reading.
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww ... I love the scene with Remus as a playful wolf. He is one of my favorites. Thanks for letting Nina take care of him too. Pitt
person pittwitch
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO: Of course Snape snores with a schnoz like that! Keep up the good work! Pitt