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by ccino49

schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ccino, still giggling like a goof!
Here I come to save the day, Mighty Moouse is on his way!
A party at th Malfoy's, hmmmm .... the possibilities.
I only deleted sections in AM that didn't pertain to the story. Just house cleaning a bit while I mull over ol' "Scaly Legs" fate.
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Go Nina .... here I come to save the day! So gld she saved the family before anyone touched the little girl. Thanks for the background on Kail. TY = thank you. Keep writing girl. I'm trying, but just can't seem to work out my details, and I might have a beta (Yay me! I like having someone to bounce my ideas off before I launch lol.) The books talking to Nina - man oh man, I'm such a chicken I would have hightailed it out of that library so fast the portraits would have been stripped! SPOOKY. Thanks for sharing, Pitt
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another good one. I has a good laugh at the pringles password. I just love the twins. Here she comes to save the day. Nina really came through for that poor family. If they were obliverated, what will they think happened to their loved ones that were killed? Update soon.

Sansa
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
After I left my last review, I read Pitt's. Her and I must be on the same wave length. I wonder if when she left the "save the day" comment if she was hearing the Mighty Mouse song (or was it Underdog?) in her head as she was writing it too! Are you old enough Ccino to remember those cartoons to know what I am talking about?

Sansa
person Miepje
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So they have to wait for Kali to say when it's okay for Severus to "enter" Nina. How frustrating. *grin* At least it's not "no touching!" so they can still have some fun together and get even closer.
And those books were scary! Thank gods Severus truly loves Nina, so he could save her. That was a very touching scene.
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was something! The house elves are just awsome. Severus on his knees sobbing was quite emotional. That was a really good chapter. Keep it coming.

Sansa
person Miepje
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That poor muggle family! I'm glad they could be saved.

The chemistry between Severus and Nina is absolutely delicious. "Headmaaaa..." I loved gobsmacked Severus *grin*
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Go Kali Go!
I have to admit I'm a little confused by the keeper of the dark magic stuff, but don't worry, my feeble little brain will wrap around it eventually. TY - Pitt
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Girl, I only meant I should have not been reading with the kiddies running around under foot! Phew, no more dark mark, no actual banging, an impudent little woman, Lucius, and a revel .... poor Snapey. Pitt
person Apryl
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well! That was a most anti-climatic cliffie!! (pun intended) The plot is getting thicker, and I'm anxious to see where you're going with it. Poor Lucius... NOT! I'm still with ya even if I don't have much to say.